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Title: Because of This Epilogue: The Overlooked Puzzle Solution
Author: Sarah B. Leonard
Fandom: NCIS
Pairing: Gibbs/DiNozzo
Rating: adult NC-17
Wordcount: 2,222
Spoilers: some mentioned, but not too serious
Warning: m/m sex,
Summary:  Tony really wants to solve the puzzle.
Disclaimer: These characters belong to DPB, CBS, Paramount, et al. No copyright infringement is intended.
Authors notes: This is the epilogue to 'Because of This' written to explain the puzzles I mentioned. Please allow yourself to enter an alternate universe where Tony and Gibbs can read fan fiction about themselves...


 

Because of This (epilogue): The Overlooked Puzzle Solution

By Sarah B. Leonard

 

Gibbs looked over at his second in command, now also his submissive. Tony had spread a bunch of papers around the workbench and was apparently grumbling at them.

Is that a cold case file, DiNozzo?” 

Because of This” Tony mumbled.

Because of what?  Oh – that story we were just reading.”

Seems there’s a puzzle. I have to figure out the answer,” Tony looked over at his lover. “The author says there’s a puzzle in here and I’m going to solve it or …”

“Or what?”

“Or … be frustrated for the rest of my life, I guess. Did you solve it?”

Gibbs just raised an eyebrow at him.

“Of course you solved it. Stupid question on my part.” 

Tony grumbled as he picked up another stack of papers.

“It’s obvious, I thought. Saw the first one right away.” Gibbs chuckled, laughing at Tony’s look of frustration.

“First one? D’you mean there’s more than one?”

“There’s three. Two are very similar, though. The middle one connects them.”

“Gimme a clue, Boss. Just a little one.”

“What’ll you give me, Tony?” Gibbs let his voice get a fraction softer, down into what Tony recognized as his toppy voice.

Tony slid off the sawhorse he’d been balancing on, landing lightly on his knees. He bowed his head.

“Whatever you desire, Gibbs.” 

Gibbs didn’t like being called ‘Master’ or ‘Sir’ even though Ducky, his trainer, had insisted that he use those terms when submitting. So, when Tony was submitting to him, he was ‘Gibbs’, but at work - or any non-submission times, Tony called him ‘Boss’. Conversely, Gibbs used ‘DiNozzo’ when he spoke to his second at work and ‘Tony’ when he was in Dominant mode.

Gibbs walked over to him, standing in front of the kneeling man. He looked down at him, smiling.

“Arm.”

Tony raised his right arm. He should have known Gibbs had something planned. He’d invited Tony to join him while working on the boat but had told him to bring his project on down with him when he’d found Tony had spread it out over the kitchen table. He was a sneaky “second ‘B’ for Bastard” bastard.

Gibbs buckled the first cuff around Tony’s wrist. Tony felt a chill run down his spine. He loved it when Gibbs put his symbols on him, and fortunately it seemed as if Gibbs enjoyed putting them on him.

“Next.”

Tony lowered the one to rest on his thigh while he raised the other arm. 

“Still a little bruising on this wrist, Tony. I won’t use your normal buckle hole – one slightly looser. Those shackles really did a job on this one.”

Tony would have made some comment about them – the kidnappers - not exactly having his comfort in mind, but he was already dropping to where his usual snarky comments were no longer quite so necessary. Speaking would have made him come back up to total awareness. 

Ducky had been concerned that Tony might fall into subspace at an inopportune time, but so far there hadn’t been any problems. One repercussion of wearing his cuffs and collar only when submitting to Gibbs, however, was that Tony fell hard and fast when Gibbs put the symbols upon him.  Even Gibbs, who was still new with this whole “alphabet thing”, as he often called it, was surprised at how quickly Tony fell into subspace for him.

“Kneel up.”

Tony lifted his ass up off his legs.  His head stayed down while Gibbs buckled on the collar. Gibbs trailed his fingers across Tony’s neck and up to his right ear.

“Look at me. I want to see how your ear is healing.”

Tony’s green eyes were at half mast as he met the blue ones. He moved his head slightly to the left as Gibbs guided him into position.

“Hole is almost gone. No more earrings for you.”

Gibbs flashed back to when Abby had carefully removed the green gem from Tony’s lobe, then confirmed the identity of the person who had been in charge of the kidnapping ring by finding her fingerprint on it. Fortunately, Tony had kept his wits about him while imprisoned and never touched it, although he had complained mightily about it itching the whole time. 

He had his moments.

“Stand and strip.”

Gibbs stepped back from his boy then decided to make himself comfortable on the recently vacated sawhorse. He watched as Tony obeyed his order, standing and removing first the cut-off sweatshirt he wore, then the loose sweatpants. As usual, he wore no underwear. 

Damn, his submissive was beautiful. He watched as Tony stood, statue still in front of him, waiting for the next order.

“Get it up.”

Gibbs loved this. Tony was already partially erect from the preceding actions, but now, on command, he had the ability to grow hard, just by hearing Gibbs tell him to do it. Gibbs watched as Tony, head bowed, arms hanging loosely at his sides, followed his tops’ orders. Without touching himself, by will alone, Tony now had a leaking and very eager erection.

Some day I’m gonna have to ask him what he thinks about to do that, Gibbs thought to himself.

Usually at this point in their relationship, Gibbs took his boy and made thorough use of him, ‘servicing him’ as Katib had said. But he was in the mood for something different today. Tony was such an amazing sight. He wanted to watch.

Gibbs reached for an old blanket that was still downstairs, from the old days when he drank himself silly down here, working on the boat. He wouldn’t even attempt the stairs back then, not in that condition. He’d just wrap himself up in the blanket and sleep down here in the sawdust. He shook it out, folded it smaller and tossed it to the floor in front of Tony.

“Kneel.”

Tony obeyed, thinking that Gibbs was going to use him orally. He started to move toward him.

“Not so fast, Boy. Just kneel.”

Tony blushed, knowing that he had assumed what Gibbs wanted. In his days with Ducky, that would bring about punishment. He should know better by now. 

“Do not assume. Do not anticipate. Do only what you are instructed to do, Anthony. You should not even be allowing yourself to think at this time. Exist merely for the whims of your Dominant.” 

He could still hear Ducky’s voice from during his training. How could he have forgotten?

What did Gibbs want him to do? No – wait. As Ducky had said, “Do not think.” Tony blanked his mind.

“Close your eyes. Pleasure yourself.”

Tony’s hand went to his own cock immediately. He closed his eyes as he wrapped his hand around his hardness and began to stroke.

“Slowly, Tony. As slowly as you can stand it. Make yourself last for me.”

That was more difficult. He gentled his own touch, feathering lightly over his sensitive flesh. That was easier. He could take this.

“Balls too, Tony. Pull on ‘em.”

His left hand followed that command. He wrapped his hand over his balls and pulled. Gibbs was driving him insane. He hadn’t said he could come, so he wouldn’t but this was not easy to do. Very difficult. Damn, he hadn’t been this hard in a long time. He kept stroking, varying the rhythm as he needed to so he wouldn’t come, but continuing the self-stimulation as ordered.

He heard Gibbs move but blocked those sounds from his thoughts. He was here only to touch himself in front of Gibbs. Touch and pull, stroke and caress, manipulate himself for his lover’s pleasure. Put on a display to entertain him. 

Tony loved it.

A cool slick liquid entered his awareness. Gibbs had poured lube over his cock. Slick, then warming: that special stuff he had shyly asked Gibbs if they could buy, that night they’d gone shopping at Innuendo. It grew warmer as he stroked, just like it had said on the label. Now he was hot, hot and slippery at the same time. He started to pant. 

More liquid landed in his left hand. Soon his balls were coated in liquid heat, tingling liquid heat. The stimulation was incredible. Tony couldn’t hold back a groan.

“Faster. Don’t come yet.”

He was glad he wasn’t standing. His knees would have buckled. The unusual smell of the lube joined with his own scent. The smell of sawdust was momentarily overpowered by the smell of sex and warming spices. He stroked himself from root to tip, tugged on his burning balls, raised his head and moaned again. Not much more – he couldn’t take much more. The knowledge that Gibbs was there, watching him commit this self torture, was pushing him further. Please please please … with each obedient stroke he begged that Gibbs would let him come.

“Stop. Hands at your sides.”

Gasping deep breaths, he obeyed. His lungs were bellows, pulling in and pushing out as he forced his hands away from the heat. He squeezed his eyes so tightly that he saw stars behind his lids.

“Hold still.”

He was shaking. He couldn’t stop shaking but besides that, and breathing, he held himself quiet. His genitals were burning, so ready to explode. Please please please. Gibbs, please.

“You are such an obedient bottom, Tony. Bottom to my top.”

Tickly tingling heat was so strong in his head. What was Gibbs saying? Bottom? He wasn’t bottoming now, he was displaying himself for Gibbs pleasure. Torturing himself, by stopping.

“Because of this, Tony often makes sense.”

Huh?

He heard Gibbs move closer to him. His head was surrounded by large gentle hands, his face pulled forward for a kiss. Gibbs wrapped an arm behind his head, to maneuver him to the right position.

“Here’s your clue, Tony. ‘Because of this, Tony owns my soul.’ Submissive to my Dominant. Bottoms to his Top. Bottoms, Tony bottoms.”

Gibbs kissed him again, kneeling on the blanket in front of him. Gibbs pulled gently on his lower lip, sucking on it then pressed deeply against his boy's lips in a rougher kiss. Tony jerked as Gibbs took his straining cock into his own hand and started stroking it. 

Please please please. Let me come.

Gibbs could feel Tony trembling under his two hands, one behind his neck as he ravished Tony’s lips and the other hand on his cock. He alternated stroking hard with soft, noticing his own fingers becoming warm as the lube continued working.

“Now, Tony.”

He cupped his hand over Tony’s cock as he spoke, wanting to feel the fountain as Tony shot on command. More liquid warmth, but this time spurting from his boy. Gibbs pulled back to watch his face. Tony was so very beautiful when he gave it all up for him. He remembered Ducky saying he should observe him – observe Tony as he submitted. Ducky was right. Tony was extremely expressive and so willing to follow his commands. 

He made sure to support him with the hand behind his boy’s neck, pressing against the collar.

So beautiful.

Tony continued to shake after he followed his top’s instructions. His breathing slowed. His muscles relaxed. He sagged in Gibbs’s arms.

“Down, on the blanket. Relax.”

Down was easier, Tony thought, once he settled enough to begin thinking again. He had no strength left. That was amazing. Gibbs had, again, taken him to new heights of ecstasy. Amazing.

“May I speak?” He could just barely whisper.

“Yeah. What?”

“That was hot, Gibbs. Really hot.”

Gibbs chuckled. “Thought you might enjoy that. Now relax. Sleep.”

Gibbs tucked a loose corner of the blanket over the shattered man.

“Tony – I’m going to start dinner. When you get some energy back, c’mon up. Dinner, then I think – one of those alphabet sessions upstairs. Ok?”

“Anything for you, Gibbs. Anyth…” Tony was asleep.

(an hour later}

Tony stretched as he smiled, waking up. Damn. Gibbs sure kept things lively. That was hot!

He stood up slowly, making sure he had his “sea legs” since he realized he was downstairs, alone with the boat. Hadn’t Gibbs said something about dinner? And then a session upstairs? Sounded like a marvelous plan.

But he’d better clean up that story he’d been searching through. Hmmm – Gibbs had done something to it. He’d taken his carpenter’s pencil and circled the title: Because of This. He’d also circled the first full sentence.

“Because of this, Tony often makes sense.”

The chapters were also spread out. He could see the first letters of each chapter – they had been in a larger font.  Part one: ‘T’, part two: ‘O’, part three: ‘N’ and part four: ‘Y’. His name – the first letters of each part. Well, that was rather obvious now, wasn’t it?

The last page was also in line with the other pages. 

“Because of this, Tony owns my soul.”

Suddenly it hit him. It was an alphabet puzzle, and not some deep significant phrase, although … well, it still meant a great deal to him. And, he knew, to Gibbs as well.

But the puzzle was solved.

BOTTOMS

T

O

N

Y

BOTTOMS

So, Gibbs had solved it.

He shoved all the pages together to take them upstairs to add to his collection of fan fiction.

Yeah, he just loved this ‘alphabet stuff.’

 

(pfoof)

 

The Final End


Comments are extremely welcome, but please don't throw rotten tomatoes, ok? 

 

 


Date: 2010-06-28 12:02 am (UTC)
ext_384643: (Default)
From: [identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com
*throws rotten tomatoes* :P

But oh so simple! :-)

I always thought that it was weird that you started each chapter with a capital letter - but now that I think about it...huh the answer was right there in the plain and you kept mentioning alphabet in the comments - clues were right there...I was looking for complicated answers, instead it was so simple!

*groans*

Oh, and I totally loved this chapter! :-) Of course Gibbs would have solved it before Tony! -grins- Oh and the hot scene between the two - yummy!

Date: 2010-06-28 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Thank you. I was just gonna have a little solving scene but then my muse said "More sex!!! More sex!!!" and this happened.
Dastardly muse, eh?

Now I have to go edit that comment after part 4....

Date: 2010-06-28 12:10 am (UTC)
ext_384643: (Tony I belong to you)
From: [identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com
more sex is always good! -grins-

That was really a good puzzle - so clever! :-) and when I re-read the chapters (well really just a quick glance) I so could see it! -grins-

Date: 2010-06-28 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Yup. It took me almost a year I think, from when I first began joking about it. But now I have written "Bottoms" (sort of) and "TOPS" (ahem... The Overlooked Puzzle Solution) and I suppose you noticed the first few sentences here .... GIBBS????

I'm exhausted.... need bourbon.

Date: 2010-06-28 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiharukitty.livejournal.com
*slaps self in forehead* How did I not catch it? I noticed the "alphabet stuff" every time you mentioned it, thought it was cute to describe BDSM that way... *sigh*

My defense is the hotness blinded me. *-*

By the way,

Get it up.

One of the hottest Gibbs lines ever! *g*

Date: 2010-06-28 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
I wondered where the "spoon" kitteh was hiding!

Glad you liked that line...

But "Bad Kitteh" - you need to go back and comment in each section! I LOVE collecting that kitteh in comments!

You caught it in the epilogue, tho, didn't you? The TOPS and the GIBBS???? I know - I couldn't resist. (gibbs/slaps self)

Date: 2010-06-28 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kiharukitty.livejournal.com
Bad Spoon Kitteh is bad! I honestly was going to review each chapter but my brain shorted out and the wordage refused to appear! In other words, I didn't feel like "ajiecneuahdjlhkjnhuhkj" would be a proper response, even though that was the only thing to come out of my mouth.

In penance, I shall go back and force myself to reread it allll over again and review. It will be difficult, but I won't stop until I've reread every single word AND forced myself to imagine every single scenario in full technicolor. With sound effects. *sigh* Such a punishment.
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
DON'T FORGET THE SCENTS! I find smells are very important to me, so I try to make mention of them too.

Yes - re-read and comment - the second time through may be easier. (I re-read sometimes before I comment for the same reason; also, I see things the second time around that I may have missed the first time because I got distracted by what was going on. Does that make sense?)

I just love those kitteh pads....

Edit: And, you missed the two icons I made JUST FOR THIS STORY!!!
Edited Date: 2010-06-28 05:09 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-06-28 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gibbsmaniac.livejournal.com
ok first off love this last chapter a lot. See just like others I tend to complicate things, but that was such a great puzzle and really meant a lot more than I would have ever come up with. Really, really loved this

Date: 2010-06-28 01:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Thanks - it sorta just kept growing and growing. I almost beat up on Live Journal when I was having problems posting part three, until I realized I was trying to post it at 200%. I needed four parts - I didn't want to have to spell DiNozzo too!

Hey - so far it's universal that only Gibbs solved the puzzle....

Date: 2010-06-28 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] murgy31.livejournal.com
OMG!!!! That was Great! I was totally making it too complicated... I loved the simplicity of the answer. It was just complex enough to not be obvious. It was brilliant!

Date: 2010-06-28 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Well, I wouldn't say 'brilliant' but it did take me a while to find semi-logical sentences to fit the requirement...

Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2010-06-28 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xanthelj.livejournal.com
Heh - that's a mighty cunning word puzzle you created there *g*. Thank you for the explanatory epilogue!

And for the story. I just managed to finish it - it was an intriguing scenario from the way Ducky trained Tony and set Gibbs up to take him on as his sub to the involvement of Katib in the whole thing. I'm glad Gibbs realised what he needed and wanted because Tony seemed intent on getting that somewhere else if Gibbs hadn't come through for him :-).

And I think that Tony would look totally HOT in that green earring *ggg*.
Edited Date: 2010-06-28 02:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-06-28 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
I agree on the earring.... but Gibbs seems to have a different opinion and, well, Tony prolly will choose what Gibbs wants. (sigh.) (Don't have a clue why he would choose Gibbs over us.)

You know how those muses get. There I was, happily crocheting away, when I get thumped on the head by my muse and her gang (who sometimes quarrel and that gets silly) and I had to stop what I was doing and solve the puzzles.

And of course, flash new ones: TOPS and GIBBS.

You see how they are?

Date: 2010-06-28 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starbuckssue.livejournal.com
Agh...it's simple when you know! I looked over it again after I finished reading it and still didn't see it so well done! What a good excuse for some more hot sex too *nods vigorously* :)

Date: 2010-06-28 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Thank you! And thanks for NOT throwing rotten tomatoes.

Well, they were just gonna solve the puzzles and then Gibbs looked at Tony and, y'know, they were alone together and down in the workshop, and the boat was there (OK - I cheated a little there...) and there was sawdust in the air and ... and ... well, need I say I had all I needed to let them at it. *** nods back at you ***

Date: 2010-06-30 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
thanks for the explanation

and *guh* - brain so fried, it still took a couple of re-reads to get the explanation

Date: 2010-06-30 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Well, sorry about your fried brain...(NOT!!! I like frying brains!) but I hope you enjoyed the story?

Date: 2010-06-30 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
yes, I enjoyed it muchly :D may I add you as friend?

Date: 2010-06-30 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Certainly - friends are welcome!

Date: 2010-06-30 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cnine.livejournal.com
I'm amazed I somehow managed to open this in a new tab and not read it.. how did I do that?

It's.. well.. the short description would be hot :D And great :D

Cool puzzle, though I must admit I hadn't solved it. Great way to give the solution :) Of course Gibbs would solve it :P

Date: 2010-06-30 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Yeah, Gibbs would be the one to solve it. He's like that.

Glad you enjoyed the hot! And the solution...

I was wondering where you were and was going to chase after you tomorrow if I hadn't heard from you!

Date: 2010-07-01 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cnine.livejournal.com
Well I ended up doing all sorts of other stuff since I suddenly had the time. I got a new shelf up in my room, got my book organized (for some reason I never have enough shelf space ;)) and got to spend time with my nieces :) And once again proved to my brother-in-law that I'm a geek, I wonder when he is going to stop being surprised..

I'm leaving for the first scout camp of the summer today, so I'll be gone for the next week. And now I should get started on packing. I have to leave in about four hours and I haven't started packing yet, which is typical me. My fellow scouts usually jokes that I can do it in about half and hour, because I've done it so many times I don't really have to think about. They are not entirely correct, but it's close ;)

Date: 2010-07-03 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferneberga.livejournal.com
As always the most obvious puzzles are the most difficult to see rather like hiding in plain sight so to speak.
I thought I was good at anagrams but must be out of practice cos I didn't see that one coming at all. Hands cookies for clever anagram

Date: 2010-07-03 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Oh I just love virtual cookies! (no calories)

And the dancing Lady!

Date: 2010-07-03 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferneberga.livejournal.com
Aw! Wipes drool from your chin with bib, no need to wolf down for Tibbs smut I can easily find you more ...

Date: 2010-07-04 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
(slurp) Thanks - I'll go start some more Tibbs (I used to have a dog named Tibbs.... always looks really weird when I see that...)

Date: 2010-07-04 03:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferneberga.livejournal.com
Know what you mean about the dog being named Tibbs, mine's called Cáit - pronounced the Irish way, making it sound like an abbreviation for 'coitus'! Needless to say she usually gets called 'cuatro (4) patas' anything except her original name -didn't realise at the time re possible confusions *face palm*

Date: 2010-10-25 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dphysh.livejournal.com
No rotten tomatoes, just bouquets for a lovely fic! Even when you had me on tenterhooks when Tony was kidnapped, I still loved it! :)

Date: 2010-10-25 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
Thank you! Bouquets are always accepted! Glad you loved it.

Date: 2011-07-19 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xenascully.livejournal.com
ooooooooooh! :D hehe awesome :) Nice hot lil scene there, as well!

Date: 2011-07-20 02:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tingreca.livejournal.com
heh heh I had to figure out an answer some how...didn't want to just tell it.
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