DON'T FORGET THE SCENTS! I find smells are very important to me, so I try to make mention of them too.

Yes - re-read and comment - the second time through may be easier. (I re-read sometimes before I comment for the same reason; also, I see things the second time around that I may have missed the first time because I got distracted by what was going on. Does that make sense?)

I just love those kitteh pads....

Edit: And, you missed the two icons I made JUST FOR THIS STORY!!!