ext_28606 ([identity profile] annieb1955.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tingreca 2010-06-21 09:04 pm (UTC)

This is a wonderfully intriguing start. I did find a couple of the PoV shifts a bit confusing to begin with but on going back and re-reading I worked it out. Looking forward to the rest.
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